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Post by jessica on Dec 4, 2006 19:15:17 GMT -5
hello Vinayak. Mr. mighty professor. I was just wondering why, me and phillip got E's. Is there anything we can do next time so that we can get an O next time?
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Phillip
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Post by Phillip on Dec 5, 2006 15:05:03 GMT -5
i agrreeee.....wut can we do ...so that we can do better? ( get a O)
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vinayak
Hufflepuff Prefect
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Post by vinayak on Dec 6, 2006 6:23:18 GMT -5
it's simple.philip,your assignment was great indeed and got me at my feet.but i think you must gather some more points for your assignment.
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vinayak
Hufflepuff Prefect
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Post by vinayak on Dec 6, 2006 6:25:25 GMT -5
and jessica,your assignment was good indeed but it's a charms assignment you are writing.so pls reduce your historical passages a bit.but on the whole your's and philips was great.
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Post by jessica on Dec 6, 2006 9:56:28 GMT -5
So then what more could I have put for the wingardium leviosa spell?? Or what was i supposed to have emphasis on?
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vinayak
Hufflepuff Prefect
Hufflepuff Books: All Classes: All Wand: Ash, 12"Phoenix Feathr w/ Veela Hair Robes: Huff Robe, Huff Tie, Dragon Hd Gloves, Winter Clk Pet: Hamster
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Post by vinayak on Dec 6, 2006 10:48:12 GMT -5
emphasis more on your charm rather than on it's history.be charming in your thoughts!!!!
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Post by jessica on Dec 7, 2006 10:11:57 GMT -5
so then lemme think in the last assignment the charm was the wingardium leviosa?? right?? or no?? and then I would elaborate more on that by saying what? I said the pronunciation, and the movement that goes with it. What else did it need?
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